One of the improvements 'I like how the page is very minimal and this exaggerates the quote more on the page. I like how the picture is aligned to the right so her face is not cut down the middle of the page.
You could maybe not write 'page' but instead justhave the number as its obvious to the reader that you are counting the pages. You could maybe make the quote marks bigger and maybe fade them.
Laura' - This is an improvement which I agree with and I will act on it. Another improvement that I recieved was. I also need to add the name of the magazine so that the audience know what magazine they are reading this article from.
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